chapter 5 page 24

… Well, we’re back in business. Delays were by the numbers, but I’m sure you guys don’t want to hear me whine about that. Anywho, trying new way of inking, maybe you see some differences, maybe you don’t. Whatever the case, I hope you guys like it.

 

Oh, changed coloring method for like the millionths time – I’m SO UNPREDICTABLY PREDICTABLE!

Getting my butt working on the next page… and the page after- HOPE THIS MAKES UP FOR THE LONG WAIT
PROBABLY DOESN’T

OH WELL- ENJOY!

Stephen.

 


Discussion (18) ¬

  1. Captain Sorzo

    *Makes various excited noises upon seeing that there’s a new page*

    Ahem. No comments on the art this time around, aside from nice use of the lighting effects in the middle set of panels.

    The narration Nicole provides works very well here, adding to the suspense. Even the alternating placement of the dialogue boxes furthers the story, as it highlights her uncertainty. That’s a rather clever touch.

    Didn’t expect Nicole to warp somewhere or receive a vision or whatever is transpiring. Things are suddenly moving at a much faster pace than I anticipated, and it looks like in the next few pages we’ll finally see the twist this entire chapter has been building up to. Definitely looking forward to it.

  2. TheRedAuthar

    Looks great to me! Keep going!

  3. Uncle Ben

    WAHOO!!

  4. Purplechu

    Expression on the bottom looks really great!

  5. Ultimate Hammer Bro

    Worth the wait… 🙂

  6. LegacyElite84

    Blinded by the light.

  7. jtreese

    Awesome!

  8. Janus

    I especially like the first panel and Nicole’s look of determination. Excellent work.

  9. Dirvinator

    *please don’t the the ending to Jak & Daxter: The Precurser Legacy*
    :p

  10. Dirvinator

    @LegacyElite84
    hahaha you legend!

  11. jtreese

    Will we be seeing Ari, Lupe, or Dulcy in Sea3on?

  12. Ultimate Hammer Bro

    @jtreese
    ARI or LUPE would be interesting! 😀

  13. Vlad Yvhv

    Yay. It’s back.

  14. scifi_addict

    @jtreese Ari or Lupe would be interesting indeed but we definitely won’t be seeing Dulcy again because she was deliberately excluded from the Sea3on comic due to the fact that most people hate her (me too) and that she appeared out of nowhere in the show’s 2nd season, so she disappeared to nowhere in the Sea3on comic 😀 😀

    Glad to see a new page, now I can’t wait for the next one! The new, smooth lighting looks awesome. I mean, it already looked awesome before, but this really is even more awesome!
    Keep up the good work and take the time needed to do it 🙂

  15. Charlotte

    Aw really? I love Dulcy, and it would be great to see a little short on how they met. :T Ah well. :'(

  16. Ultimate Hammer Bro

    @Charlotte
    One short on how they met, one short on how she left. (nice poem i got here)

    But I don’t think they’re showing her in the main comic. It’s been really dark, and IMO, a “I’m fine ma” joke would ruin the atmosphere.

  17. Dirvinator

    better drawn than most of the Archie comics, they take it easy on the background and smaller things like if a characters in the background they’re just draw a blow with eyes, granted its a bit different but still the artist of this comic takes so much time and puts so much work and effort into this, its just a shame that Ken Penders and co cant do the same :p sea3on rocks!

  18. Dirvinator

    this is better drawn than most of the Archie comics! they take it easy on the backgrounds and smaller objects, like if a characters in the background they’ll just draw a blob with eyes, granted its a bit different but still the artist of this comic takes so much time and puts so much work and effort into this, its just a shame that Ken Penders and co. cant do the same :p sea3on rocks!

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